That was lovely!
I really liked how you handled Clark's fear in this story--it does some like hurting Lois would be a very big deal to him, something that would be hard to let go of. And the assassination attempt was definitely something that deserved more attention than it got in the series.
Another thing I loved about this was how you handled Perry. You can really feel his pain, and his process of healing was nicely done.
Great "relearning" part for Clark--I agree about the poetic comments!
And finally, it was great how you handled Lois and Clark coming together. Lovely story!
