This part was amazing--I loved how you built the tension by showing us Lois's thoughts torn between calling for Superman and watching the news.
I'm so impressed with the way you've portrayed Clark and his absolute, unshakable determination to leave and do what he must.
The lines after he says he won't break his word are some of my favorite, particularly the ending one where Lois realizes that it is, simply, Clark Kent.
I'm off to read the third part and find out how she expects this partnership to work--I'm relatively certain it will be because she wants the inside track to the superhero, but we'll see.
Thanks.
