Once again, you've bridged parts of an episode so flawlessly it's hard to tell script from the new parts. Lovely insight into Clark's doubts - after having super powers, Lois may think he's not really super.

Love this part:
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"Superman is having who you are taken from you and given away to someone else, yet still retaining your gentle grace. Superman is supporting someone you could so easily resent or envy and selflessly teaching them how to take your place. Superman is refusing to be embarrassed at a lack of power while still doing what you must to ensure that justice prevails. Superman is stopping a mugging with powers or without, protecting someone else's life even at the cost of your own, and persevering even when I'm sure you felt too tired or weak or, I don't know, *human* to keep going. *You* are Superman, Clark Kent, and I don't think that has ever been illustrated so clearly to me."
Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Joan