Yay, Robin! And update!  I think I like Lane. He's a cutie. I think the only thing I'd change is some sort of formatting change or something to set it apart for the flashback because I had to read it more than once to figure out what was going on. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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