Thanks, for taking the challenge.
about Clark's running off:
Clark seemed perfect in every way except for that one thing and it always made her feel just a bit unwanted.
I never thought of Lois reacting in that way, and yet it makes sense given her character.
<<I won't cry. I refuse to cry...>>
7:33. Lois gave in to the tears.
I know this is sad, but it made me grin a bit. Heartless, I know. Good to see the wallowing followed by 'anger' and then 'huff' - much healthier and very 'Lois' .
And even better, when Clark shows up. Just a matter of time, after all.
btw, I'm impressed that you could do this in less than hour! Nice vignette, mozartaid.
carol
