Intriguing start, ML. I've always wondered what Lois would be like if her parents had a happy, loving relationship. but of course, you still wrote Sam Lane as a man who was disappointed in his daughter's career choice, so maybe she'll still have that chip on her shoulder and the attendant need to prove herself at every turn.
And what sort of trouble is Clark going to cause by messing with the fabric of time? I guess I'll just have to wait and find out. Great start, but do you have any idea what time it is in North Africa when its midnight on the East Coast of the US? Argh.
Anxiously waiting for more.
Rac
