Ooh, progress in the A-plot!

I don't like the recurring nightmares, but I do like it that Clark sought Lois' input and Dr. Friskin's help almost immediately. I liked his talk with Officer Kyle Dawson, a young man with loads of potential who will probably continue to be a very good cop.

And I like it that Superman is investigating the bomber and his connection with the Triads. If Superman can make it uncomfortable for the Triad leaders even in China, then he should also be able to put even more pressure on their associates in the States.

"End badly for them," indeed.

Great story! When's the next chapter?


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