Hmmm, there's been no reply to this. Well, I read it, and it was pretty much what I expected it to be, but it was well written and I liked it. I appreciated how you cut out huge chunks of the story and just brought us to some highlights. It worked very well.
So Clark left for Krypton not knowing he was going to be a dad, eh? Figures. You made it seem reasonable that Clark would be particularly amenable to Zara and Ching's Kryptonian siren song if he thought he had blown his chances with Lois.
Now I guess we all hope it won't be too long before Clark returns home.
Ann
