Okay, I know this story has been posted for awhile, but I've been sort of out of fanfic lately (lack of time issues, not lack of interest), but needed a small diversion from work and came across this on the boards. It was perfect as a diversion, although sad.
Very well done, Lynn! I have to say, the opening line struck me as odd - it didn't sound like Lois to me - but not enough for me to realize what you were up to, so I was still surprised at the ending, and then loved the first line, which fit very well with the Lana we saw in the alt-universe.
I have to also say, Bob's comment about this Jonathan deciding to use his powers interests me as well - it would be quite an emotional story to see this boy grow up and realize he has powers and decide to use them despite his mother. And it would be interesting to see how Clark reacts to this.
