Great story! I could quote pretty much everything from the moment he shows up in her balcony. So I'm just going to go for this instead (couldn't help laughing!)
“Ladies and gentlemen, we just received word that Oceanic Air Flight 815 out of Sidney has reported landing gear failure on its descent into Los Angeles. The flight crew has informed the tower of its distress and is going to attempt to halt its descent in order to use up fuel. The video to your right is the scene at LAX where officials are… Wait… is that a bird?”
So you just closed your story and prevented Lost from ever happening? :p
Thanks for the fun ride!
