Ah! That was a fantastic ending! I was a bit worried there in the previous chapter, but you did amazingly with this!
I love Clark's approach here. It was a very unique way of doing things, and it was fun to see how it played out.
You have given this story a lot of enjoyable little touches all over the place (like with Lois investing in Martha's business and the resultant shampoo smell residue), and it has really made this very fun to read! Thank you for this story!
