Very nice! The real Lois is there, but just doesn't have those personal-relationship insecurities. I particularly liked the interplay between her and Cat.
Clark didn't fall head-over-heels right away, though, did he? He was clearly interested, of course, but it was a slower transition from interest to friendship with just hints of potential for more.
If the story were to continue... would this particular Lois, not so dazzled by the super man, see more quickly that they are one and the same?
'Toc
Oh, yes, and I should add - I, too, loved the part about the (not)Alexander-the-Great's sword.