First, I am enjoying this story. It's fun and different and well written. I like how Clark's secret is out and how Lois is doing something so completely different. The weekend getaway was great.
However, call me an old stick-in-the-mud, or old fashioned, but for me this part crossed well over the PG rating the fanfic board is supposed to have. There was little left to the imagination.
Didn't see the Lana thing coming. Wow!
