Ummm, after reading again the end I think you were right to cut here.
Maybe you're going to kill me but I've been in fic and computer detox last two weeks
(useless of course) and I hadn't been able to read part five and six until yesterday. And I've just send the comments back to her. But don't worry, part five was BRed by Tricia, so next week it would be here.
Jose
