I know this is very old, but I'm very behind in my fic reading and so just discovered this.
It's great, Michael - I could feel Lois' anger, but she still made me laugh. I particularly loved her name calling of Superman when talking to Clark - both the names, but also the fact that she does it. It gives credence to the idea that she really does love Superman for who he is even if she doesn't realize it - her ability to get angry at him for his behavior makes her feelings ring true.
