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Posted By: Darth Michael FDK: The Ordinary Man - 05/04/09 01:41 PM
Hi!

I hope you had fun reading it smile FDK is always appreciated.

Complete Vignette / TOC

Michael
Posted By: LaraMoon Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 05/04/09 05:15 PM
*snort* Oh, I laughed and smiled so much, reading this. laugh Thanks for posting!! thumbsup
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 05/04/09 08:18 PM
Cute story Michael. Nice job. Laura
Posted By: Elisabeth Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 05/04/09 09:01 PM
Backstabbing corncob?


Elisabeth
Posted By: Framework4 Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 05/05/09 07:41 AM
Cute. smile1
Posted By: GamesAway Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 05/06/09 01:55 AM
Lovely story. Love that Lois went to confront Clark - I've always hated that episode went, it was just wrong.
Pig of Steel and Ape beneath the Cape LOL laugh
I loved the way Clark throws holes in her logic, and gradually builds to showing her *he* is Superman. smile1
Posted By: TOC Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 05/06/09 09:12 AM
That's a really nice re-write of an infuriating episode!

Ann
Posted By: amberlea Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 05/07/09 12:28 AM
That was a great vignette! I loved all the details, especially Lois with the ice cream and also all of her thought processes.

Thanks for bringing it into the light of day/the boards!

Amber
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 05/07/09 02:04 PM
Hi Guys! smile1

Lara, thanks so much. I’m glad you had fun reading this. wave
Posted By: anonpip Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 07/17/09 09:36 PM
I know this is very old, but I'm very behind in my fic reading and so just discovered this.

It's great, Michael - I could feel Lois' anger, but she still made me laugh. I particularly loved her name calling of Superman when talking to Clark - both the names, but also the fact that she does it. It gives credence to the idea that she really does love Superman for who he is even if she doesn't realize it - her ability to get angry at him for his behavior makes her feelings ring true.
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: The Ordinary Man - 07/19/09 03:29 AM
Hi Nancy!

This is so cool that you dug this one out hyper Thanks so much hyper

Michael
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