I think you are doing a nice job with this.
I liked that you pointed out the fact that the kids would have had to turn ON all of the TVs in the city. The things the kids supposedly achieve are really too much to accept no matter how smart they are supposed to be. (I like the way their remote device can control purely mechanical parts without the need to any electromechanical actuators. Give me a break. :rolleyes: )
I did like the idea that Lois with Clark in her life is going to be in a better position to connect with Aymee. I expected her to talk about her past but I was surprised that she was so open about how Clark was part of that. I like the fact that Lucy is around to provide an alternate / little sister view of Lois for Aymee.
Bob
