Hi Beth, Nice start.
Some interesting twists on the various relationships. Martha is Lois’s surrogate mom. So, who *is* Superman when he’s not wearing the suit? Speaking of the suit, who made it? And of course, what’s with the accent?
Is there going to be a Lois <-> Superman relationship with no “secret identity” triangle? I’m sure that’s been done but I’m not that widely read so I don’t recall reading LnC stories where that was not an aspect. This probably isn’t where you are going. (But it may be an interesting idea.)
Just idle musings. I’m looking forward to more.
Bob
