Thanks for the comments guys!
That flashback of Jay's (and Kaylie's) mom was truly something.
I was a little insecure about posting it (ask my BRs), so I'm glad to hear that you liked it.
Have I mentioned how much I still love this?
Thanks, Carol. Check your inbox.
I was getting the same impression Ellie got. I don’t know if it was because of the double point of view, or just because you write Jay so cold and distant. But I was feeling like he was getting annoyed by their relationship problems.
Hopefully, you'll get to see a side of Jay that isn't so cold and distant in the near future. He has a lot of stuff kept inside him, but he's got to let that out if he wants to be happy.
Thanks everyone for the comments!
