You have definately written Lex quite the smooth character. I can see why Lois would fall for him. I just hope she will see him for who he is before she gets her heart broken. The more I read the more I think he is more dangerous then he appears. Unless St. John works for others, then it is Lex who has him testing superman and plans to kill him, and when Lois learns this, then watch out Lex because here come Mad Dog.
I have noticed that all of you main females have horrible mothers/parents. Did you do this on purpose? I know this story is finished but I wanted to ponder this before moving to the next chapter.
