More, please... I can never get enough of this!
I think you did an incredible job at making the story seem so timeless. I only notice that when Jon said that he was born in 1998, or when Kaylie said that her childhood hero was Kim Possible. But the story feels so timeless. I mean I’m like ten years older than him. I’m old enough to baby-sit both of them, lol.
Her reaction to when Lois picked the phone was funny. I’d probably had done the same thing. And I loved when Kaylie said this:
The things I’ve been doing are so sensitive that they can’t be placed on a computer system where any geek with a tech degree can access them.
