Well I liked the end result but...
... ok I confess that I am the person responsible for a) the polygamous religious cult and b) Lois' fish and novel in "Clinton Street" aka Clark's apartment.
I just wish someone had gone with the cult thing but I got confused anyway after Clark drags Lois into the closet ostensibly to fly out and then starts talking about having sex with her and Jimmy right there?
I feel like I am tripping when I read this.
We should do another one! Practice makes perfect!
The Little Tornado.
The Little Tornado is ....
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Marisa Wikramanayake
Freelance Writer & Editor,
Board Member of SoEWA and Writing WA
http://www.marisa.com.au
