Great story! I just caught up with the 5 parts tonight. I'm not normally into next-gen stories, but the set-up is just really, really interesting!
On a complete side-note, can you imagine what would happen if Superman pulled the "I have a secret identity, but I can't tell you about it" on Lois?
It works for Jon and Kaylie, but I just see Lois either blowing a gasket or falling off a cliff trying to figure out the secret. More votes to the cliff reaction.
JD