The board has been a bit quiet for a few days. Maybe everyone's been involved in their NaNoWriMo stories.
I read part 3 and liked it. As I said to Zoar, I've been a bit rushed for several days between babysitting, trying to put my house back together after the evacuation and what not. Still haven't managed all of that, by the by.
Anyway, I see you're following the timeline of the show with your new twist added. It shows promise of some innovative changes to the original story. I'm interested in what you do with it.
Nan