Very sweet part, Nan. Vonceil already quoted my favorite part, the ending. It was great and wonderfully in "teenaged Lois and Clark" character.
I think it's interesting that this is alt-Clark, who has been orphaned twice, and yet he is such a good and happy boy. Lois, on the other hand, is struggling with her mother, and her father's rejection of her is deeply hurtful to her. Yet she, too, is doing well.
It will be very interesting to see where you are going with this!
Ann
