Hi Chris,
I've been following your story all along. RL has made responding difficult. Anyway, your writing is so precise. I really enjoy all of the description that you use. People's looks and actions, dialog inferences, and the tediousness of a stakeout are all included. Very impressive. You are a gifted writer. The scene is now all set for a powerful conclusion. I can't wait...
Now, write-on!
Anne
