Shayne, picturing this in the Buffy-verse/Lois and Clark-dom as I am, I'm really really enjoying your story! I've only just managed to start reading it now, but have quickly caught up and am intrigued.
I watched Buffy from about Season 4 onwards and loved the show. Just as I loved LnC. Therefore I'm happy to read a knowledgeable, interesting plotline for a crossover. I love that Lois is a Slayer! When's she going to meet Buffy? Huh?
I think what I'm trying to say here is that I'm going to be following your story.
~Anna.