All right so I was a bit late getting into the story, but now that I've caught up, I just have a few things to say:
I'm totally thrilled that you've made Lois a slayer Shayne!! I've always thought that would make an amazing crossover premise, as our Lois is perfect for the job.
In general, I'm really digging the story so far. I don't really have time to go into details now, but keep up the good work!
