Ooh, tricky. "Superman's" not coming for you, Luthor, but someone just as dangerous to you - maybe even more so - is coming.
Or so they're going to tell him. Wow. Excellent piece of misdirection. I never saw it coming. Brilliant!
Now, if only Luthor would walk out of the room and stop irradiating the Superman he thinks he's trying to lure into his trap, not realizing that he's already got him.
The nosebleed bothers me. Makes me wonder just what's going on. Of course, that was your purpose, Dandello, and you've succeeded. Can't wait for the next part!
