Very lovely re-write! I never liked how Lois ended up thinking that Clark would go away for a weekend with Mayson. That just seems so out of his character, so I really liked how everything ended up in your story.
I loved the revelation scene! For once, Clark was just as surprised as Lois when he blurted out his secret!
I just read this story for the first time today, and I'm very glad you were able to find the time to finish it!
