ML, what a fabulous story and a great premise! Of course I love everything you write, but this is really fascinating and I especially like that the teenaged Lois and Clark were actually in the same place at the same time and never knew it. The way their eyes met and they instantly recognized each other was perfect.
I don't think they'll consummate their relationship now. One or both of them will realize that it will change their pasts too much; I'm betting on Clark, but poor guy, he's really having a hard time resisting so much temptation in so many situations. Although of course I'm enjoying how turned on they are by pretty much anything the other does at this point.
Can't wait to see what happens next. More please!
Vicki
P.S. I recently read your newest archive story when Kal comes to earth and needs Lois's help - it was marvelous. I'll send you an e-mail about that when I can.
