Uhm... I have been a bad girl... I have been following this story without leaving feedback...
So here it goes:
Well written and captivating. I love the children, especially when they are exhibiting the character traits of Lois and Clark (the first ones...)
On one hand, I'm surprised to see Perry going along with their wish to investigate; on the other hand, it's Lois and Clark... nobody's better than them at that.
So.... keep going!
Sira
