FDK: Clearing the Record 9/? - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

I am really enjoying your story! But... Clarkie?!

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Lois Lane didn’t cry in public. Her eyes widened as she regarded the boy sitting at the next desk. “Clark, we’re not brother and sister, are we?”

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The female is his birth-wife, Lausa Gem-Ar, last daughter of the House of Ar, an old and noble house.

Interesting. Gem is a sometime nickname of James.

Can't wait for the next part!

Sam

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I am really enjoying your story! But... Clarkie?!

Thank you, thank you - Lois (either one) likes to pull Clark/CJ's leg a little. Okay, more than a little.

Uhm... I have been a bad girl... I have been following this story without leaving feedback...

So here it goes:
Well written and captivating. I love the children, especially when they are exhibiting the character traits of Lois and Clark (the first ones...)
On one hand, I'm surprised to see Perry going along with their wish to investigate; on the other hand, it's Lois and Clark... nobody's better than them at that.

So.... keep going!

Sira

Hi,

Great part!

Hi,

Where are you?

MAF

My muse has been difficult on this one - but it's coming along slowly. I promise.