Love this. And I know exactly what they did to make her scream. And I know that she would be alive when Clark got there 27 seconds later but it would still be too late and everything would be irreversible. Cue: angst as Clark berates himself and angst while Lois reacts to what made her scream.
Huge drama potential but I am glad it's stopping there. Going through all that angst would have killed me.
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