Oh wow! I really didn't think I'd hear from anyone, being an unknown and all. Thanks for the feedback, you guys!
I had tinkered with the idea of extending the story and then decided that I kind of liked leaving it hanging the way it is. I did tease my beta that I would do a series of horror movie titles. That means I get at least three "Screams" before I have to think up something else, right?
Thanks again! I really appreciate your kind words.
J