Okay, my excuse is two-fold.
One, I still can't get on these boards with my normal PC, and so I'm relagated to my old iMac. It's not as comfortable working on a small table in the bedroom rather than my nice computer set up in the living room.
Also, I never start threads. I only jump on occassionally when I have something to say that everyone else hasn't said.
To the point. I like how you've set this up so far. I think that the fact that you haven't started to stray away from the actual episode yet has kept people from jumping on board with any comments. Most of the TOGoM rewrites start at where your instalment number three has left off.
I like the implication that there might have been some kryptonite in the club and that Clark is actually bleeding, but not much (part 3). The inclusion of Nigel is fun also.
But beyond that, there hasn't really been any divergence from the episode yet. I suspect once you get into part four, and start veering off the series episode the feedback will pick up as people will comment on the different direction that you may be taking, and the angst that we'll be able to see Lois under going.
Going good so far, looking forward to more.
Tank (who is always up for a good TOGoM based fic)
