Hi Nan! Sorry I'm so late to the party... but can I say "HOLY CRAP"!
That was hot!
Nan! I'm shocked.
I love the story and all your attention to detail, like the fact that Clark wouldn't know his name is Kal-El yet... wonderful.
But the shedding of the clothes on the beach and Lois telling Clark to shut up that he talks to much? That was just priceless!
Oh, and I see now that I'm caught up, that you have posted part 4. Yippee! I'm off to read!
-- DJ