Hokay, now I know where the 'any language' part of the title came from.
You know, if I was blown away by a woman who subsequently treated me like Lois is treating Clark, I'd have to sit down and re-think my first impression skills. She's even more abrasive and standoffish here than she was in the pilot ep! Makes me want to trip her.
I'm glad Clark isn't just sitting back and taking it. He shouldn't quite respond in kind, I think, but he should let her know that he's not scared off by her crummy attitude. And maybe he should play a little hard-to-get, eh? Maybe he shouldn't be such a doormat this time around.
Very nice alternate take on the first meeting! I wonder where you're going to take this, but wherever you go, I think it'll be an interesting trip.