Great part Bakasi!

You show some real insight into both Lex's and Lois' characters, and your presentation is very good. I liked Lex's thoughts about how to trap Lois but not scare her off by acting too quickly or forcefully--the frog metaphor was great! :p And then having the two inner Loises fight was good too, very Lois, I can definitely see her thinking that way.

Also, an innovative approach to "the Clark Kent problem." Having Lex tell her such an outright lie will definitely move this story along to (hopefully) some nice angsty scenes! wink Because, as Lois said, this lie is easily proven to be just that.

Excellent, can't wait for more! thumbsup


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