smile - hehe I just read part one and then discovered part two!
What a fabulous part. My eyes were wide while quickly reading, trying to absorb as much of Lois' anguish as possible.

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So maybe he was Joe Smith, or Bill Jones, or that bastard freak-of-nature Dick Clark. He could be a dozen people with a dozen different lives and a dozen different jobs and a dozen different best friends. He could be anyone.
As heart broken as I am for Lois, this made me giggle. laugh Great stuff!

I like the fact that Clark followed her home. Very sweet and like him.

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But she had pulled away from him before he knew what was happening and stormed out with tears in his eyes.
In his eyes? Ah! thumbsup

I can hardly wait for more!

...what only three parts!!! thud


I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.