Thanks to everyone for leaving feedback for this story. I think it's interesting to see what can give you away as an author, like in my case using bold letters for emphasis. But I'm also glad that I wasn't so obvious that everyone guessed me right away. Being mistaken for KSaraSara, lovetvfan and JadedEvie is a huge honor, actually.

I'm so glad lovetvfan liked my answer to her prompts, particularly since it was a real struggle to balance angst and sexual tension. The no A-plot rule was also a tough one, because I was forever agonizing if the tidbits of background information I had given were already too much. But I'm not very good at writing just this fluffy sort of angst.

This GTA was so much fun. Thanks to everyone who participated.

Last edited by bakasi; 01/22/24 12:46 PM.

It's never too dark to be cool. cool