Loved this! I'd love to see a sequel, or maybe Lois realizes that man was Clark at some point while working with him at the Planet....
Ahh, yeah, that would be interesting! I almost feel like this moment might stand out enough to her that she'd recognize him...right away... And then when Superman showed up... Hmmm! Would be interesting to think about!
So sweet, and the first person was spot on with how I imagine she'd feel with not knowing where her sister is.
Yay! Thanks!! This one did seem to lend itself well to the first person POV, which I just love to write in!
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the FDK!!
-Bek
