Toomi!!!!
It’s a crime that I somehow managed to not read the second half of this story!!! But I’m caught up now and GAHHH!!!! The emotions here were just SO awesome!! I loved having Mayson tell him straight up how his behavior affected her (and was affecting Lois too). And Lois’ reaction too was good! It was a great choice to have this all in Clark’s POV because GAHHH… there are so many emotions and thoughts and everything he had to deal with, and you did it so well!
Thanks for sharing!!!
Sara
