Ack! All right, ladies, where’d my happy place go?! I was lulled into this cotton candy cloud of waff and then bam, here come the last 5 parts and my heart has been in my throat through all of them! I think it’s because you all write waff so well, I forget that you can write a killer a-plot too!
Ever since you dropped the somebody’s-took-a-shot-at-you part, I’ve been like Clark - super paranoid at every turn. I thought you might go cleaning guy at the planet (a la Barbara Trevino) to get to Lois, then I was paranoid about the police escort (he works for Luthor!)… I was nervous about anyone Lois passed on the street, lol. These last few parts have definitely been intense.
I liked the call back to The Phoenix with Lex getting to her that way… this Lex was seemed a bit more sinister and… unhinged, maybe? He doesn’t have his love for Lois (however weird and kinda obsessive) to slow his roll, like in the show. I was scared with Lois!
And so how did Clark find her? She couldn’t yell, she just kept calling to him… are we just reaching across time and space like at the end of S3? I’m so happy he did, and I’m interested to see how this convo is going to go, now that she realizes just what he did to save her.
Still loving, still reading, still impatiently waiting for each part!
