Thanks to everybody who posted feedbacks. I'm glad you liked my story.
But...curiouser and curiouser - the A-plot thickens!
Yep! I worked hard to define the A-Plot, and it will continue to develop in the nexts chapters.
since that poster of yours piqued my interest, I figured I'd give it a shot.
Ah! I knew it was a good idea to do a poster!
Seriously, this story definitely screams for some humor and waffy'ness which will hopefully appear in the upcoming chapters. So far you've started your story based on one grand misconception of the public regarding their "relationship" and this last sentence in chapter 2 just cracked me up I'd so love to see Superman's reaction to this.
Waffy'ness will be on the program, but not right now! Since the waffy scenes I wrote are the conclusions of things that happens in the A-Plot, it won't be before the second half on my story.
Humor? Yep! That's coming! Actually, I thought that A-Plot, A-Plot and more A-Plot were boring to write(and probably boring to read too), so I decided to write a fun break on the story, and that's part 3!
And part 3 is coming right now! So, how will Superman react?
