Ooh, love love love that ending!!! And I like the setup with Intergang too, it's very logical. I am hoping that we get to see a little more interaction between Lois and Clark though, so bring on the next chapter!
I agree with whoever suggested a beta reader in the last FDK; you're doing an amazing job, but the tiny errors, though not that important to actually understanding the story, can be distracting. I've never done it before, but if you're nervous about asking, I'm offering up front. I'm sure there are better betas though, so I won't be offended if you want someone with more fanfic experience
. Out of curiosity, what is your native language?
