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“Focus on this, son,” he said, seizing Kal-El’s much smaller hand and placing it firmly at the side of his warm throat, on his pulse, as he pulled Kal-El against his wide chest.
Not sure if you intended it, but I totally got choked up reading this and the bit after it. Good job!



"Oh my gosh! Authors really do use particular words on purpose!" ~Me, when I started writing a book.