Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
I stifled my laughter only because I didn't want to alarm my wife. And it wasn't easy, let me tell you! We need TV commercials telling us not to text and cook. Kara could have used some of that wisdom. rotflol

Great story, Jelly! Your target was obviously the funny bone, and you hit it dead center. clap
Right on both accounts - there's a whole slew of things people shouldn't do while texting and I was most assuredly going for laughter! Thanks, Terry.

Originally Posted by LadyTpower
great job, I loved Kara smile
Me too! I'll have to keep her in mind should I need her in a future fic. wink

Originally Posted by Lynn S. M.
That was hysterical. (And it made me feel a little better about never having been served a Mother's Day breakfast in bed.)
frown I hope your kids don't suffer from the Lane curse! (I'm pretty sure my sister and mother do... but they've both grown out of it)

Originally Posted by Morgana
Yikes! New toaster? I don't want to know! dizzy
I considered adding that little scene in, but it kept feeling forced. Made a fantastic little 'what-the-heck' there at the end though... wink



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