I'm not sure. I didn't write Dan in any of these fics, just focused on what he'd said or done in Resurrection. I guess seeing Lois go back and forth with everything makes him more irksome?
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one Mille. Hope real life slows down a little for you. Thanks for stopping by.
I'm afraid that I wrote in too much haste and not with enough precision: I
do know that Dan isn't in your fic, but Lois's attitude about him makes the character even more irksome than in the series: I guess the actor has such a ridiculously funny ebullient presence on screen that the audience just
knows that Lois
will see the light in the end. (After all the series is called "Lois and Clark"!) Yet, you made Clark's angst and Lois's vacillations much more tangible than on tv...
I'll come back on the boards asap. I miss you guys!
