Wonderful!

I enjoyed how Sandrine recognized that Schwarzy-El was really Kal-El (so to speak). I'm not normally one for dream sequences, but yours was a good one.

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“Are you a mind reader?” Sandrine exclaimed in alarm.

Clark laughed. “Not yet

Not until Zara and company arrive. Dream Clark might not be a mind-reader, but he appears to have precognition.

I like how Sandrine is thinking about ways she can help Clark misdirect the public, and I would not be at all averse to her visiting Clark in a sequel. I'd be especially interested in seeing Lois's reaction to her. (Just how jealous will she be?)

Clear off some room for more Kerths; I expect this story will win several next year.

Joy,
Lynn

p.s., I am curious about whether LexArts' funding of Sandrine's work was just a bit of world building or whether it was the seed for a future story.

Last edited by Lynn S. M.; 05/21/18 06:55 AM. Reason: Added p.s.